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WARNING! This is swearing in this! But we have Romano is this chapter, so whaddya expect? No likey? Don't read!
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‘GET OUT! GET OUT YOU DISGUISTING GIRL! YOU LAZY, USELESS, UGLY PATHETIC CHILD!’
You felt your shoulder come into contact with the cold cerement of the pavement, and a white-hot pain shot through. You had no time to just lie there and cry though, as moments later, an empty beer bottle smashed against the floor, where your head had been no more than two seconds ago.
‘GO! NEVER DARKEN OUR DOORSTEP AGAIN! YOU MURDERED! IF IT WASN’T FOR YOU, YOUR MOTHER WOULD STILL BE ALIVE!’
You small bare feet picking up speed, you began to run from your house, your fathers screams of abuse growing quieter as you got further from the house.
You continued to walk, clothed in nothing more than a small dress that was covered in holes and rips, and was very thin on your skeleton-like body. Your bare feet got colder as you stepped in puddles and trod on the wet ground. Your mattered [h/c] hair hung in front of your [e/c] eyes, and occasionally, you would attempt to push it out the way, only for it to fall again.
After about an hour of walking, you were feeling really tired. You hadn’t eaten in two days and your sleep had been little.
You trudged to the door of a large building – it was warm and provided shelter from the oncoming rain. Collapsing in a small huddle, you curled up, and your eyes slid shut.
***

‘Bloody frog!’ I marched from the hall, cursing under my breath at him. Goddammit, I needed a cig, he was driving me up the wall!
Pushing the doors open, I stepped outside, and drew the stick from my pocket. Holding the lighter up, I saw something suddenly, causing me to drop both objects.
It was a young girl, who looked no older than 4. She was clothed in a tattered dress, and bruises covered her small, shivering body.
‘Bloody heck!’ I rushed over, laying a hand on her arm, feeling the paper like skin, which felt like it was almost breakable.
‘Oh god.’ I scooped her tiny form into my arms, cradling her close to my chest.
She twitched slightly, and her eyes fluttered open to reveal shining [e/c] orbs.
‘W-Who are y-you Mister?’ she whispered.
‘I’m England love. Who are you?’ I asked.
‘Girl.’ She replied simply.
‘Surely you must have another name?’
‘If I did, I was never told. My daddy always called me ‘girl’ usually.’
I gave a small growl. Instantly, I felt her tense.
‘P-Please, don’t hurt me! I’m sorry!’ she cried.
‘Hurt you? Why on earth would I do that poppet?’ I asked, amazed.
‘Daddy always growled before he hit me.’ She whispered.
I stared down, and sighed.
‘I will not hit you love. A gentleman should never hit a lady.’ I said.
‘A-A-Are you going to take me back?” she asked.
‘No.’ my response was immediate. ‘Never. However, I am going to take you inside. Be warned, my… friends, can be rather loud and sudden.’
I walked back inside the building, heading back towards the room. As we approached, I could hear the usual yells that filled the hall…
“THE HERO IS HERE! OH, AND NO ONE CAN DISAGREE WITH ME! ‘I agree with America-san….’ ‘MAN UP OR I'LL BEAT YOU WITH MY NOBEL PEACE PRIZE!’ ‘BECOME ONE WITH MOTHER RUSSIA, DA?’ ‘AI YAI, FOR THE LAST TIME, NO!’ ‘PAAAAAASTA!’ ‘ZHE AWESOME ME IZ HERE!’ ‘VERDAMMT PRUSSIA, SHUT UP!’ ‘THE KING OF NORTHEN EUROPE IS WAAAY BETTER!’ ‘IN JOUR DREAMS, I AM VAY MORE AWESOME!’ ‘BIG BROTHER!’ ‘NOT SAYING IT!’ ‘BIG BROTHER!’ ‘NOT LISTENING!’ ‘BIG SISTER!’ ‘NOW YOU’RE NOT MAKING ANY SENSE!’ ‘This is m’ wife…’ ‘I AM NOT HIS WIFE!’ ‘MARRY ME BIG BROTHER!’ ‘GO HOME!’ *BOING BOING!* ‘SHE SAYS IT, WHY CANT YOU!’ ‘PRUSSIA IF YOU COME NEAR ME AGAIN I WILL BRING MY FRYING PAN OUT!’ ‘YOU ARE ALL SO VASTEFULL! GERMANY, ZHIS JACKET CAN BE FIXED!’ ‘AUSTRIA, I VILL BUY A NEW ONE!’ ‘POTATOE-SUCKING BASTARDS!’ ‘OHONHONHON, RELEASE YOUR SEXUAL TENSION SOEMWHERE ELSE!’ ‘SHUT UP CHEESE-EATING BASTARD!’ ‘ROMANO, CALM!’ ‘SHUT UP TOMATO BASTARD!’
‘Bloody hell, SHUT UP YOU WANKERS!’ I shouted, standing in the door.
The room fell silent, all eyes trained on me.
‘Dude, who’s the duddette!’ America leapt to his feet, grinning. ‘Is she yours?! Iggy, I never thought -!’
‘Of course not, you prat! I found her outside the meeting room…’
***

You listened as the man, England, explained it to the others.
‘Are you going to keep her aru?’ asked a man, whose long brown hair was tied back in a ponytail.
‘Well, unless anyone else wants to…’
‘Ohonhon! I do not zhink ‘e should take ‘er! I shall taker ‘er. Last time England raised a child… well, let us all look now to America.’ A man who had shoulder-length blonde hair chuckled as both England and another man, who you assumed to be America, yelled out indignantly ‘What’s that supposed to mean?!’
‘Ve~ I want to take the little bambini!’ Another called.
‘She shall come with zhe awesome me!’
‘Zhat is a very bad idea bruder, you can barley take care of yourself. I should take her.’
‘No way, the king of northern Europe shall have her!’
‘M’yb’ I sh’ld t’k’ h’r…’
‘Ai yai, none of you know anything about children! I shall take her!’
‘I shall take the sunflower, da?
‘Maybe I could take the little maple leaf?’
‘HEY GUYS, MAYBE THE HERO SHOULD HAVE HER?’
‘…no one notices me…’
‘She needs a mother! I will take her!’
‘And I vill be zhe father?’
SMACK!
‘OWW! You are mental frau!’
‘I have an idea.’ you looked to see a large, well built man, with blonde, slicked back hair. ‘Everyone shall put an object is zhe hat. Zhen, the frau vill pick ein object out. Vho’s ever object she picks, she shall stay with zhem.’
Nodding and murmuring, each one moved forward to place a different item in the hat that the large man held. He shook the objects slightly, and then held that hat out to you. You reached out, and buried your small arm in, rummaging.
I do not own any of the Hetalia characters. 

What do you pick??? (I will start with my fav character, Germany, but request in the comment section!

1P'S
A Cross Necklace (Germany): sarah-layton.deviantart.com/ar…
A Maple Leaf (Canada): sarah-layton.deviantart.com/ar…
Gilbird (Prussia): sarah-layton.deviantart.com/ar…
A Nordic Cross Barret (Norway): sarah-layton.deviantart.com/ar…
A Tomato (Spain): Requested
An American Flag Pin (America): Requested
A Wooden Doll (Sweden): sarah-layton.deviantart.com/ar…
Axe Key Ring (Denmark): Requested
Fake Fangs (Romania): Requested
A Lotus Blossom (Japan): Requested
A Tiny Frying Pan (Hungary): Requested
Kitten Plush (Greece): Requested
A Sunflower (Russia): sarah-layton.deviantart.com/ar…
Fake Moustache (Romano): sarah-layton.deviantart.com/ar…
Sheet Music (Austria): Requested
Hello Kitty Doll (China): sarah-layton.deviantart.com/ar…
Stuffed Reindeer (Finland): sarah-layton.deviantart.com/ar…
Piece of Liquorice (Iceland): Requested
A Mochi (Estonia): Requested
Green Hair tie (Lithuania): Requested
Pink Ribbon (Poland): Requested
A Scone (England): Requested
A Rose (France): Requested
A Small Scarf (Ukraine): Requested
A Pocket Knife (Belarus): Requested
A Small Mask (Turkey): Requested
Toy Sheep (Wales): Requested
A Four-Leaf Clover (Northern Ireland): Requested
Tap Shoes (Southern Ireland): Requested
Small Boomerang (Australia): Requested
Small Kiwi Bird (New Zealand): Requested

2P'S
A Small Hockey Stick (2P Canada): sarah-layton.deviantart.com/ar…
A Cupcake (2P England): Requested
A Pair of Sunglasses (2P America): Requested
A Daisy (2P Russia): Requested
A Small Bustina Hat (2P Italy): Requested
A Light pink Scarf (2P Romano): sarah-layton.deviantart.com/ar…
Purple Hair Tie (2P Spain) Requested
A Small Black WW2 Field Cap (2P Germany): Requested
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:iconilovehetalia224:
Ilovehetalia224 Featured By Owner 6 days ago
this dude please --> Lithuania (Scared) [V3] Lithuania (Intro) [V6] 
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:icondaughterofthemoon213:
daughterofthemoon213 Featured By Owner May 6, 2015  Professional Artist
belarus and lithuania please Lithuania (Scared) [V3] Belarus (Intro) [V7] 
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:iconyugiohfangirl2:
YugiohFangirl2 Featured By Owner May 5, 2015  Student Traditional Artist
I want Spain, I want Spain! Please? I think he makes a great father~. Don't you?
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:iconpowerfulannie:
PowerfulAnnie Featured By Owner May 3, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Quock make Belarus! Please!!
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:iconkaro246:
karo246 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2015
Could you do Greece?
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:iconcorpsepartyfan2244:
CorpsePartyFan2244 Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Glad to have you back!
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:iconbigthinkz546:
bigthinkz546 Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2015
what's worse,England's cooking or Oliver's poisoned cupcake?
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:iconteazulywaffles:
TeAzulYWaffles Featured By Owner May 10, 2015  New Deviant
Me:.....Well.....There is a way to know....*stares at Lapuntu and Eden*
Lapuntu&Eden: Huh? why are you looking at us?
~~~~2 Scones and 2 cupcakes later~~~~
Lapuntu:*Passed out on the floor*
Eden:*in the bathroom,well........Doing the barf things*
Me:.....looks like it's a tie!
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:icontsubaki236:
Tsubaki236 Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2015
Can i read A Small Black WW2 Field Cap (2p Germany) ???
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:icondaughterofthemoon213:
daughterofthemoon213 Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2015  Professional Artist
can't wait for more Italy (Globe Dance) [V2] Dansu plz 
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:iconmarriedtoamerica:
MarriedToAmerica Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2015  New Deviant
Can you do Estonia or Lithuania?

I honestly don't know if you're taking requests but, if you are I would like Estonia or Lithuania
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:iconkillerdonut28:
Killerdonut28 Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2015   General Artist
Nonono... It's: MAN UP OR I'LL BEAT YOU WITH MY PEACE PRIZE.
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:iconsarah-layton:
SaRaH-lAyToN Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Is it? Thank you for that! I misheard XD
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:iconkillerdonut28:
Killerdonut28 Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2015   General Artist
No prob!
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:iconsunset30:
sunset30 Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2015
hs icon [MMD emoticon] Miku on a chair 
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:iconyaoigurl53:
yaoigurl53 Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2015  New Deviant Student Writer
Idk if i overlooked it ,but could you do switzerland?
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:iconbigthinkz546:
bigthinkz546 Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2015
Elizaveta und Belarus
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:iconraichufan12:
RaichuFan12 Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Yes
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:iconbigthinkz546:
bigthinkz546 Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2015
please make them
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:iconeliza1012:
Eliza1012 Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2015  Hobbyist Filmographer
Can you do Belgarus and Japan please
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:iconanimerulz21394:
Animerulz21394 Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2015
Maybe when you have time can you do switzerland and also I'm glad you feeling better 😊
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:iconmeowhug17:
Meowhug17 Featured By Owner Edited Mar 14, 2015  Student Filmographer
Awww poor thing! ;( Hope you feel better soon! Depression is rough, but the key is to not let it control you! Sending wishes of happiness,hugs, and twinkies (sorry i had to :D )
from New York! Keep moving forward, hon and eventually you'll kick this thing's ass!
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:iconmarriedtoamerica:
MarriedToAmerica Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2015  New Deviant
I hope this depression goes away!
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:iconclearisbae4lyfe:
Clearisbae4lyfe Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2015  New Deviant
Can chu make Romania 
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:iconclearisbae4lyfe:
Clearisbae4lyfe Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2015  New Deviant
Or New Zealand 
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:iconvilabeth:
Vilabeth Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
Your a wonderful writing, made me laugh, cry, flaile around.p and in awe. I read them all and cNt wait for more chapters. Sorry to hear that your battling depression, I know that feeling al, to well.  Hope you will be alright, even thou I don't know you, I am sending you wishes of happiness and sending hugs. 
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:iconchica9234:
Chica9234 Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
Can you do more pleaseeeeee I love this series :333
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:iconmylittlepolarbear:
MyLittlePolarBear Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
I don't know if you're taking requests or even doing the story right now, but do you think you'd be willing to do Switzerland?
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:iconraymangirl6:
RaymanGirl6 Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2015
Italy please? 
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:iconraymangirl6:
RaymanGirl6 Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2015
China is a girl 
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:iconyaoigurl53:
yaoigurl53 Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2015  New Deviant Student Writer
the fu-
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:iconraymangirl6:
RaymanGirl6 Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2015
It's true! 
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:iconyaoigurl53:
yaoigurl53 Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2015  New Deviant Student Writer
Im sorry to say this but its not ,not a her ,but an it
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:iconraymangirl6:
RaymanGirl6 Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2015
....!? Wait what?!
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:iconlmp2104:
LMP2104 Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2015
2P Romano...please?
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:iconstorymakerdressuper:
Storymakerdressuper Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2014
- FIRERAGE - :backstab: remake I wanna kill that horrible fan fictional dad so badly!
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:iconkyoko-kimo:
Kyoko-Kimo Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I want moreeeeee!!!!!!
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:iconanakind87:
anakind87 Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2014
Personally, the more 'better' fathers I have, the better. I'd like to have them all as daddies - better than having that drunkard, abusive, heartless, psycho bastard as a father
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:iconxxangelofthedarkxx:
XxAngelOfTheDarkxX Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2014
I really loved your story's I can't wait for more.. you are doing more right!?!
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:iconkimsueng:
kimsueng Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2014
oh wow, she's like an object, they don't even ask her opinion 
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:iconmoonlight034:
MoonLight034 Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2014
I read all the parts and they are amazing!!! Pls pls pls , do Romania and Spain too!!! <3
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:iconneonbrightdevil9:
NeonBrightDevil9 Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2014  Student Filmographer
oh plus 
'Zhat is a very bad idea bruder,you can barley take care of yourself,I should take her' 
xDDDDD
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:iconneonbrightdevil9:
NeonBrightDevil9 Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2014  Student Filmographer
LOL XD I could tell this was romano xD

'SHUT UP CHEESE EATING BASTARD' 

i loved when they were screaming and shouting xD
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Clarity-Foxx4 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2014  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
These are amazing I can't wait till release more parts :) I'm looking forward to it Chibi Hungary-01 (Smile) [V2]  Hetalia Spinning Japan Excuse ME Icon  
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lucarioniteofAPH Featured By Owner Edited Nov 20, 2014  Student General Artist
Hope that your depression wont take over writing. Your fanfictions are really good!

Oh my god, the first time I submitted this comment, it said will instead of won't. :|
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:iconqueenfreak28:
queenfreak28 Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2014
Francy pants!!XD
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:iconqueenfreak28:
queenfreak28 Featured By Owner Edited Nov 19, 2014
2pAmerica!!!XD
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:iconmew-blueberry12:
Mew-Blueberry12 Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Do you think you could possibly write. N. Italy ? 
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