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WARNING! This is swearing in this! But we have Romano is this chapter, so whaddya expect? No likey? Don't read!
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‘GET OUT! GET OUT YOU DISGUISTING GIRL! YOU LAZY, USELESS, UGLY PATHETIC CHILD!’
You felt your shoulder come into contact with the cold cerement of the pavement, and a white-hot pain shot through. You had no time to just lie there and cry though, as moments later, an empty beer bottle smashed against the floor, where your head had been no more than two seconds ago.
‘GO! NEVER DARKEN OUR DOORSTEP AGAIN! YOU MURDERED! IF IT WASN’T FOR YOU, YOUR MOTHER WOULD STILL BE ALIVE!’
You small bare feet picking up speed, you began to run from your house, your fathers screams of abuse growing quieter as you got further from the house.
You continued to walk, clothed in nothing more than a small dress that was covered in holes and rips, and was very thin on your skeleton-like body. Your bare feet got colder as you stepped in puddles and trod on the wet ground. Your mattered [h/c] hair hung in front of your [e/c] eyes, and occasionally, you would attempt to push it out the way, only for it to fall again.
After about an hour of walking, you were feeling really tired. You hadn’t eaten in two days and your sleep had been little.
You trudged to the door of a large building – it was warm and provided shelter from the oncoming rain. Collapsing in a small huddle, you curled up, and your eyes slid shut.
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‘Bloody frog!’ I marched from the hall, cursing under my breath at him. Goddammit, I needed a cig, he was driving me up the wall!
Pushing the doors open, I stepped outside, and drew the stick from my pocket. Holding the lighter up, I saw something suddenly, causing me to drop both objects.
It was a young girl, who looked no older than 4. She was clothed in a tattered dress, and bruises covered her small, shivering body.
‘Bloody heck!’ I rushed over, laying a hand on her arm, feeling the paper like skin, which felt like it was almost breakable.
‘Oh god.’ I scooped her tiny form into my arms, cradling her close to my chest.
She twitched slightly, and her eyes fluttered open to reveal shining [e/c] orbs.
‘W-Who are y-you Mister?’ she whispered.
‘I’m England love. Who are you?’ I asked.
‘Girl.’ She replied simply.
‘Surely you must have another name?’
‘If I did, I was never told. My daddy always called me ‘girl’ usually.’
I gave a small growl. Instantly, I felt her tense.
‘P-Please, don’t hurt me! I’m sorry!’ she cried.
‘Hurt you? Why on earth would I do that poppet?’ I asked, amazed.
‘Daddy always growled before he hit me.’ She whispered.
I stared down, and sighed.
‘I will not hit you love. A gentleman should never hit a lady.’ I said.
‘A-A-Are you going to take me back?” she asked.
‘No.’ my response was immediate. ‘Never. However, I am going to take you inside. Be warned, my… friends, can be rather loud and sudden.’
I walked back inside the building, heading back towards the room. As we approached, I could hear the usual yells that filled the hall…
“THE HERO IS HERE! OH, AND NO ONE CAN DISAGREE WITH ME! ‘I agree with America-san….’ ‘MAN UP OR I'LL BEAT YOU WITH MY NOBEL PEACE PRIZE!’ ‘BECOME ONE WITH MOTHER RUSSIA, DA?’ ‘AI YAI, FOR THE LAST TIME, NO!’ ‘PAAAAAASTA!’ ‘ZHE AWESOME ME IZ HERE!’ ‘VERDAMMT PRUSSIA, SHUT UP!’ ‘THE KING OF NORTHEN EUROPE IS WAAAY BETTER!’ ‘IN JOUR DREAMS, I AM VAY MORE AWESOME!’ ‘BIG BROTHER!’ ‘NOT SAYING IT!’ ‘BIG BROTHER!’ ‘NOT LISTENING!’ ‘BIG SISTER!’ ‘NOW YOU’RE NOT MAKING ANY SENSE!’ ‘This is m’ wife…’ ‘I AM NOT HIS WIFE!’ ‘MARRY ME BIG BROTHER!’ ‘GO HOME!’ *BOING BOING!* ‘SHE SAYS IT, WHY CANT YOU!’ ‘PRUSSIA IF YOU COME NEAR ME AGAIN I WILL BRING MY FRYING PAN OUT!’ ‘YOU ARE ALL SO VASTEFULL! GERMANY, ZHIS JACKET CAN BE FIXED!’ ‘AUSTRIA, I VILL BUY A NEW ONE!’ ‘POTATOE-SUCKING BASTARDS!’ ‘OHONHONHON, RELEASE YOUR SEXUAL TENSION SOEMWHERE ELSE!’ ‘SHUT UP CHEESE-EATING BASTARD!’ ‘ROMANO, CALM!’ ‘SHUT UP TOMATO BASTARD!’
‘Bloody hell, SHUT UP YOU WANKERS!’ I shouted, standing in the door.
The room fell silent, all eyes trained on me.
‘Dude, who’s the duddette!’ America leapt to his feet, grinning. ‘Is she yours?! Iggy, I never thought -!’
‘Of course not, you prat! I found her outside the meeting room…’
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You listened as the man, England, explained it to the others.
‘Are you going to keep her aru?’ asked a man, whose long brown hair was tied back in a ponytail.
‘Well, unless anyone else wants to…’
‘Ohonhon! I do not zhink ‘e should take ‘er! I shall taker ‘er. Last time England raised a child… well, let us all look now to America.’ A man who had shoulder-length blonde hair chuckled as both England and another man, who you assumed to be America, yelled out indignantly ‘What’s that supposed to mean?!’
‘Ve~ I want to take the little bambini!’ Another called.
‘She shall come with zhe awesome me!’
‘Zhat is a very bad idea bruder, you can barley take care of yourself. I should take her.’
‘No way, the king of northern Europe shall have her!’
‘M’yb’ I sh’ld t’k’ h’r…’
‘Ai yai, none of you know anything about children! I shall take her!’
‘I shall take the sunflower, da?
‘Maybe I could take the little maple leaf?’
‘HEY GUYS, MAYBE THE HERO SHOULD HAVE HER?’
‘…no one notices me…’
‘She needs a mother! I will take her!’
‘And I vill be zhe father?’
SMACK!
‘OWW! You are mental frau!’
‘I have an idea.’ you looked to see a large, well built man, with blonde, slicked back hair. ‘Everyone shall put an object is zhe hat. Zhen, the frau vill pick ein object out. Vho’s ever object she picks, she shall stay with zhem.’
Nodding and murmuring, each one moved forward to place a different item in the hat that the large man held. He shook the objects slightly, and then held that hat out to you. You reached out, and buried your small arm in, rummaging.
I do not own any of the Hetalia characters. 

What do you pick??? (I will start with my fav character, Germany, but request in the comment section!

1P'S
A Cross Necklace (Germany): sarah-layton.deviantart.com/ar…
A Maple Leaf (Canada): sarah-layton.deviantart.com/ar…
Gilbird (Prussia): sarah-layton.deviantart.com/ar…
A Nordic Cross Barret (Norway): sarah-layton.deviantart.com/ar…
A Tomato (Spain): Requested
An American Flag Pin (America): Requested
A Wooden Doll (Sweden): sarah-layton.deviantart.com/ar…
Axe Key Ring (Denmark): Requested
Fake Fangs (Romania): Requested
A Lotus Blossom (Japan): Requested
A Tiny Frying Pan (Hungary): Requested
Kitten Plush (Greece): Requested
A Sunflower (Russia): sarah-layton.deviantart.com/ar…
Fake Moustache (Romano): sarah-layton.deviantart.com/ar…
Sheet Music (Austria): Requested
Hello Kitty Doll (China): sarah-layton.deviantart.com/ar…
Stuffed Reindeer (Finland): sarah-layton.deviantart.com/ar…
Piece of Liquorice (Iceland): Requested
A Mochi (Estonia): Requested
Green Hair tie (Lithuania): Requested
Pink Ribbon (Poland): Requested
A Scone (England): Requested
A Rose (France): Requested
A Small Scarf (Ukraine): Requested
A Pocket Knife (Belarus): Requested
A Small Mask (Turkey): Requested
Toy Sheep (Wales): Requested
A Four-Leaf Clover (Northern Ireland): Requested
Tap Shoes (Southern Ireland): Requested
Small Boomerang (Australia): Requested
Small Kiwi Bird (New Zealand): Requested

2P'S
A Small Hockey Stick (2P Canada): sarah-layton.deviantart.com/ar…
A Cupcake (2P England): Requested
A Pair of Sunglasses (2P America): Requested
A Daisy (2P Russia): Requested
A Small Bustina Hat (2P Italy): Requested
A Light pink Scarf (2P Romano): sarah-layton.deviantart.com/ar…
Purple Hair Tie (2P Spain) Requested
A Small Black WW2 Field Cap (2P Germany): Requested
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:icondarkrosestayla1:
DarkRoseStayla1 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2016  Hobbyist General Artist
I hope the others will be out soon dear ^^
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:iconboopmaster112:
boopmaster112 Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Please Please PLEASE do 2p France!! Thank you!
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:iconirenetheawesome:
IreneTheAwesome Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2015  Hobbyist
Switzerland Please .....
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:iconspecialartist17:
SpecialArtist17 Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
‘…no one notices me…’
Who said that? And it wasn't Canada.
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SpecialArtist17 Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
‘BIG BROTHER!’ ‘NOT SAYING IT!’ ‘BIG BROTHER!’ ‘NOT LISTENING!’ ‘BIG SISTER!’ ‘NOW YOU’RE NOT MAKING ANY SENSE!’
This is from Always With You by the Nordic 5
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theyoungestbrony Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2015  Student Digital Artist
why does America seem so... that's offensive! it's my country...
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:icontheyoungestbrony:
theyoungestbrony Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2015  Student Digital Artist
Also, do America!
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:icondragoneaster12:
dragoneaster12 Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2015
Ouhhh... So her fathers an abuser ehm?....WELL I SAY BRING HIM TO ME NAW!!!
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:icontitanhetalia:
TitanHetalia Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2015  New Deviant Hobbyist Artist
I COULD RECOGNISE THE BOYS BY THEIR SPEECH XP
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:icondori-moonrise:
Dori-Moonrise Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2015  Student Artist
I would like it if you did 2p!Prussia.
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elfqueen13 Featured By Owner Edited Nov 18, 2015
I'd like to see Switzerland Switzerland (Intro) [V6] , maybe something like one of those mini Toblerone bars? Oh! Or a ribbon, like the one he got for Liechtenstein!

Awesome story! Keep it up!
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:iconmissy-kitty-swaggy:
Missy-Kitty-Swaggy Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2015
MAKE 2P AMERICA :D
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:iconstormc97:
stormc97 Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2015  Student General Artist
Um.... I'd like America done soon, please. I wanna watch him ask England or Canada or France for help. It could be either 1p or 2p. 
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:icondaughterofthemoon213:
daughterofthemoon213 Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2015  Professional Artist
2p germany please!!!!!Steven Universe Pearl (Smile) 
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:iconhuntermyth9999:
HunterMyth9999 Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2015
Sorry for not telling you earlier, but I copied and pasted this onto my Wattpad, said it was yours of course, and lots of people like it. Sorry for not telling beforehand.
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SaRaH-lAyToN Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
OoO what's your Wattpad username? I must find you and add you!I'm MidgetJaffaCake!
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HunterMyth9999 Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2015
HunterMyth9999.
It's easy to remember. So I use it everywhere.
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MysteriousHoodedMan Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2015  Student Writer
I can't wait to see Lithuania's!!
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:iconreasonablefreak:
ReasonableFreak Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2015
2p Germany please!!! I love this btw haha xD
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:iconanglelovefoxy:
anglelovefoxy Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2015
Do 2p England plz
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:iconcocokittykat:
cocokittykat Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2015  Student Artist
i like altough i would like to ask is greece's done?
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:iconthepokemongeek:
thepokemongeek Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2015
Italy wants multiple babies...
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:iconanimequeen10:
AnimeQueen10 Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Japan please! ^-^
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:icontitanhetalia:
TitanHetalia Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2015  New Deviant Hobbyist Artist
Why are you doing it to piss people off? That's fucking SAD
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:iconintothewoods0405:
intothewoods0405 Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2015
Omg so funny i was reading all the captialize words out loud and really fast and i burst out laughing lol XD
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:iconpainted-lullaby2:
Painted-Lullaby2 Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
England please :3
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:icontooney2001:
tooney2001 Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2015
Can you add Thailand to your list plz?
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EmmiRald Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
May I please request an ending, if it isn't too late? If I can, could you please do Vietnam for me? If you can't do Vietnam, then I am happy with a Switzerland ending.
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:iconhetalia4elea:
Hetalia4Elea Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
2p America please
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:icontsukitakazawa:
TsukiTakazawa Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2015
2p!China please? :3
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:iconsorrynotsorrycupcake:
sorrynotsorrycupcake Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
England, please!
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MrGamerGirl Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
I haven't been picking favorites (Well, except for Canada but SHH). Instead, I've been doing it how Reader-chan has been doing it: at random! I scroll the screen at an optimal place, then wave my mouse over the list several times, then click! It has been very entertaining.
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Southparkfangirl99 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2015
Japan,Poland,England,France and Greece please?
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:iconhigeloid:
Higeloid Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
fRance!! ~////////~
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:iconnat-a-random-fangirl:
Nat-a-random-fangirl Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2015
This is my friends account and this is so good! I love it! <3 Lol, when she finds out I used her account, she's gonna kiiilll meeeee XD
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The-Minxinator Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
I WANT OLIVER CUZ HES SOOOOOOO CUTE AND HE WOULD FEED ME CUPCAKES ALL DAY IF HE WAS MY FATHER sorry my caps lock broke hehe
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:iconcr8zyg8rl:
cr8zyg8rl Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2015  Student Digital Artist
I just saw three comments in a row asking for mainly Lithuania.
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:iconskylinathehedgehog:
SkylinaTheHedgehog Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2015  Student
Japan? Please?
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:iconsusanlucariofan16:
SusanLucarioFan16 Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
can't wait for japan's
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:iconcalmfangirl-candygur:
It'll be funny if Sealand, WY or Seborga putted an item in XD
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:iconkspowell2002:
Kspowell2002 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2015  Student Filmographer
Hehehehehe
yes  my countries 
You have fallen into my little trap
hehehwahe
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:iconkaro246:
karo246 Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2015
Could you do Romania? thx if you do it
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:iconkidxmaka11:
kidxmaka11 Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2015
Hey! What bout 2p!France? He's like a lazy bad-ass/womanizer! Can chu plz make one for him! If it's not too much trouble!
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:iconmistpaw89:
Mistpaw89 Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Please do these two ------> Lithuania (Intro) [V6] Belarus (Intro) [V7] 
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:iconilovehetalia224:
Ilovehetalia224 Featured By Owner May 23, 2015
this dude please --> Lithuania (Scared) [V3] Lithuania (Intro) [V6] 
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:icondaughterofthemoon213:
daughterofthemoon213 Featured By Owner May 6, 2015  Professional Artist
belarus and lithuania please Lithuania (Scared) [V3] Belarus (Intro) [V7] 
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:iconmistpaw89:
Mistpaw89 Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
YAS!!!!!! YAS!!!! YAS!!!!!
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:iconkspowell2002:
Kspowell2002 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2015  Student Filmographer
Don't we all need a lithuania and Belarus as our parents
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:iconmistpaw89:
Mistpaw89 Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Ya
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